Writing in Immediate Scene

Via Bertram's Blog:It wasn’t bad, merely boring; it read like a synopsis rather than a fleshed out novel.Like a synopsis, eh? In other words, no immediate scene. I have finally given way to the belief that many would-be novelists just don't know what immediate scene is! They're faking it when they pretend they know what you're talking about.Nonetheless, you'd think they'd notice the glaring